Author's Notes: Don't Cry No Tears

This story (like most of my more recent ones) has some source in recent events. Basically, what happened is that some friends and I were at the mall back in Bowling Green, and met some friends of one of my friends. I got a phone number from one of them, and as it happens, this one friend of mine did so as well.

When everything had worked itself out, if either of us were going to start anything with her, it was him. I bowed out, as I always did, but that didn't exactly help matters. As it happens, that day at the mall I had gotten a copy of Matthew Sweet's Son of Altered Beast EP, which included a cover of Neil Young's "Don't Cry No Tears," which described a similar situation.

The first time I tried to write this, I trashed it. Then, after "Baptism By Fire" mysteriously became a writing sample, I was asked to submit an original piece. I wrote it out again, and with some fixing and expanding, it stretched out to over twenty pages -- easily the longest thing I had ever written, papers for class included. I submitted it, and waited.

This is the story that got me on a publishing company's mailing list. It didn't work out because the list messages started coming in after I had left school, and thus I didn't know about them until I had gotten net access again and telnetted back to WKU (about two months later or so). I had been dropped from the list, due to inactivity I suppose. I left a message with the new fiction developer, and never heard back. Then again, I didn't exactly push the issue, so it's not entirely their fault, and thus I shall not name them here, to avoid causing any leeriness of them.

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Mark Kinney / alberich@iglou.com